Searria H.

Wow. Sorry this took so long, but life's been hectic! Okay. I really liked this chapter, and it didn't seem to incomplete to me. Everyone has already pointed out the ...

I thought that this was a good poem. It kept its rythym and For the most part, its rhyming pattern. I agree with Fellow on the fact that the title ...

I'm not sure if this is what you were going for, but I thought it was sort of cute. I know what it's like to have to babysit your three-year-old ...

Hallo, Sunlight! welcome to YWS. Just remember to read all of the rules. Make sure that you keep the 2 to 1 ratio of reviews and posts. :D It isn't ...

Hello Dreamer! Since everyone has already told you about the rules, I'm going to skip over that. Welcome to YWS!! This is the most helpful writing site I've ever been ...

These are neat. I thought the fire hydrant was a little random, but that's all right. It looked a little odd in the picture, as Firestalker pointed out. The flower ...

Very cute. I love her hair! I'm always amazed by people who can draw, because I have no talent whatsoever. :cry: Her face looks a tiny tad bit short, but ...

Wow. There are a lot of pictures. I like the last group. They're very artistic. I like the one with the falling daisies and the blue smoke. I don't know ...

Yes. drawing in a car can be extremely difficult, but you did an excellent job. I couldn't have done anything like that even if I wasn't in a car. I ...

I had to read this a couple of times before I understood it. I think I get it now. Perhaps this should be in Narrative poetry. I'm not really sure. ...

This was an interesting poem. Sometimes, I felt that you were forcing your rhyms a little bit. Also, your poem didn't have a rhyming pattern. Sections did, but you changed ...

You had better post all the chapters! You cant do that to us!!! :wink: Wow! It left me with my mouth open(something I don't do very often) If you get ...

Sorry that this took so long, but I've been really busy. Wow. Good story. You're the first writer I've ever met that starts with the ends. I always jump around, ...

Fellow, Wow! You've been busy in the past day! Already 25 posts??? Lynlyn has already told you about the 2 to 1 ratio, so I'm not going to go into ...

You should really watch the whole movie sometime, especially if you know the myth. I laughed a lot. Not because it was funny, but because of the cornyness of it. ...